laura is my best friend, she is 15 years old, and actually she is studing with me.
she is very friendlyand talkative,she alway staies with me in every moment.she soports me whe I cry and when im sad.
her skin is white, she tall,her hair is light brown and she alwayswear skirts.
she very smart and easy going,i always speak with her for along time she really is me best friend.
hi katy, nice job
ResponderEliminarbut I think you made a mistake when you wrote: She very smart and easy going because you forgot to write the verb to be.
Hi Katy... i want you job. but think what you should tell more just to the makes with you friend.
ResponderEliminarGreat job Katy!
ResponderEliminarBut You have some mistakes like:
She really is me best friend, is not me is My.
And also, you have some errors with the Capital letters for the names and at the beginning of the paragraphs.
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